Tuesday, 28 April 2015

Autumn at Waimairi School

Autumn is late but cold around here
Getting sick is my most small fear
I trip over and land on my rear...
SO annoying!

Water is power as it lands SMACK!
Rain and wind has started to hack
All from the sky that's black as black
SO annoying!

Great sky looms above my head
I wish that I was back in bed
I growl and scowl and my eyes turn red...
SO annoying!

I have just got my jumper on
When the sunlight comes and bursts upon
I'm really hot now the sun has shone...
SO annoying!

7 comments:

  1. I love this poem! I like how you described the rain as "hack"

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  2. I like how you describe being so annoying because you can't go outside.

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  3. I loved when your said " great sky's looms above my head " nice one NAIMA

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  4. I SO love this piece of work Naima! I know the feeling of how cold it is in autumn. I also LOVE the twist at the end. Seriously, keep up this great work!

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  5. Thank you for your comments everyone!

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  6. Wonderful poem Naima! I like how you discrived the sky looms above my head and the sun busting out of the clouds. I can really tell that autumn isn't your favourite season!
    I hate it when get your cosy jumper to set of into the cold. But then suddenly the sun comes out and you get REALLY HOT!
    Mana

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  7. This is an amazing piece of writing, Naima. I love your humour in this poem as you describe Autumn (originally my favourite season). I think it's really funny how you get your jumper on and then it becomes to sunny to wear a jumper. GREAT JOB NAIMA. (I am starting to have second thoughts about Autumn.)

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