Monday, 4 May 2015

Super Teacher 2

Once upon a time there was a really fun teacher called Mrs. Bentall. She played really fun games with the kids, she always brought a big bag of jelly babies for the kids, and she made maths fun.

Now there was another teacher called Mrs. Pageot. And she thought the kids liked Mrs. Bentall more than her. But she did not know that the kids liked them equally. So one day she sneaked into Mrs. Bentall's classroom and stole her big bag of jelly babies.

When she got back to school, her favourite pink hat with the words: "Mrs. Pageot Rocks!" on the front was gone!

That morning tea, she saw Mrs. Bentall with her hat on! But instead of saying "Mrs. Pageot Rocks!" on it, Mrs. Bentall had crossed out the word "Pageot" on it and now it said, "Mrs. Bentall Rocks!"

So Mrs. Pageot stole Mrs. Bentall's maths games.

Mrs. Bentall stole her yoga ball.

Mrs. Pageot stole her maths badges.

It kept on going on and on. Mrs. Pageot stole Mrs. Bentall's things and Mrs. Bentall stole Mrs. Pageot 's things. But one day when Mrs. Bentall went to room 17 to steal something from Mrs. Pageot, she saw, to her horror, that there was nothing to steal! Mrs. Pageot 's room was jammed full of her things!

And when Mrs. Pageot went to steal from Mrs. Bentall 's class, her class was jammed full of her stuff!

Then Mrs. Bentall and Mrs. Pageot thought that there was no reason to be arguing. So they gave back each-other’s things.

But nothing could fix Mrs. Pageot 's pink sun hat that now said, "Mrs. Bentall Rocks!" on it. 

9 comments:

  1. Super Teacher 3 coming next week!

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  2. I like it a LOT! Imagine if it was like that in real life!!!

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    1. Maybe it DID happen but Mrs Pageot and Mrs Bentall didn't tell us...

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  3. Wow, so cool. It reminds me of my sister and I. I could imagine this turning into a picture book one day. Keep up the great work!

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  4. That's awesome. I have know idea where you get this massive sense of humour from, but you get it from somewhere and load your stories with them. I really liked it when (apparently) Mrs Bentall stole Mrs Pageots pink hat that said Mrs Pageot rocks! (She does, and so does Mrs Bentall). Anyway, let's get back to the main part. Can you tell me where you get all the humour from?

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    1. Thank you for your comment! I get my imagination from my own world, Naimraria. It has lots of joke shops that give you cool ideas! You can get into Naimraria by getting into my shrinking machine, climbing up me and crawling into my ear. Then you go along a tunnel that leads to my brain. It does not hurt me; only tickles me! When you get to my brain you will find a door set in it. Open it and you will be in Naimraria!
      Thanks for your comment!
      Naima.

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  5. Really good story Naima you really explained the characters and the story really well. I had a super teacher named Mrs.Templeton

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    1. I could do one for Mrs Templeton if you like! She was my best friends teacher until he moved to Fernside.

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  6. I love this story, Naima! I love how you tie the ending to the middle of the story. (Casper's Dad, Eric, is wondering why Mrs Bentall and Mrs Pageot didn't just switch classrooms when all of their stuff was there already!).
    I'm glad I checked out your blog tonight. Can't wait to see where Naimraria takes your writing next.
    From Casper's Mum, Ruth

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